PROPOSAL

It is very delightful
When u know u are in love.
Flying like a dove
With all your zeal and passion,
Dreaming in the day
Jogging in the night.

You decided to propose
Fearing your foe intend to dispose.
You tried to fled
Your heart find it hard.
You tried to stay ,
Your mind betray.

Finally, you went to her
Your foot didn't enter.
You dropped the letter brought for her
Which gets crimson by your blood.
You packed your sack, doorbell cried,
You find honey hugging you
Said why so late.

AS FAR AS THIS DRAFT IS CONCERN IT LACKS QUALITY, WHAT THE FEEDBACK I GOT,BUT THIS IS MY FIRST .
I HAV WRITTEN THIS WHEN I WAS IN CLASS 11.I REALLY LOVE IT.